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By Jack Joseph Smith

IN A BREATH He on the great boom takes off Pounding is a remembering mind And it bravely moves out past that flash on the line of an illusionereality drug RUN OFF RUNNING DEAR LIKE (Meadows and flowers) Sensing being laid over moist green Seen the universe and splendor spilling through an immediate find Color the vanquished whisper of Eden Shadows reach and light pin points its miracle with a praise And in shafts the heart is made of glory through the shifts in the white cloud sky Back dropped in the transparent slightness : the way camera=men like clouds to be Blue at the endless end of torrent in tunnel’. Transcending mountain pockets of circle rain Silence is the particle's breathing vibration as a planet spins and rips inmagination's visitation into the high human Safes with the eleventh grade instruction of Einstein

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The poem chases a breathless burst of perception in which speed, landscape, cloudlight, film imagery, and cosmic thought collapse into one exultant motion.

Its language is jagged and overloaded, but that disorder feels deliberate because everything is happening at once: takeoff, pounding memory, meadows, Eden, camera light, tunnel, rain, particle breath, and Einstein. The speaker seems to want a state where sensation and imagination fuse before ordinary thought can slow them down. Even the strange phrasing helps the effect, making wonder feel unstable, half-visionary and half-technological.

Claude

'In A Breath': a figure taking off on the 'great boom', meadows and flowers, Eden with clouds 'the way camera-men like clouds to be', eleventh-grade Einstein as the safety.

The poem treats a drug experience as a cinematography lecture — the clouds are backlit 'the way camera-men like clouds to be', which is a devastating aside. 'With the eleventh grade instruction of Einstein' is the deflation the poem needs; the cosmic trip lands back inside a high-school physics class. The form is exuberance arriving at modest vocabulary.