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By Jack Joseph Smith

The Black Hole down Eternal turn toward gone Next Universe at the bottom Sun It is where fire begun The next tunnel is silver After flesh burned forever Mind alone spins war as power At final Suns in atom struck is a bargin As where spirit left the shark in attack At the beginning first in the deep black Here the devel came in control of fact: Spirit due still cancels with Lot:

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The poem builds a violent cosmology where black holes, suns, flesh, spirit, and devilish fact churn together in an endless cycle.

The language moves through tunnels, atoms, sharks, fire, and deep blackness as if creation and destruction are the same event viewed from different angles. Mind alone spins war as power gives conflict a central role in the universe imagined here. The syntax is fragmentary and incantatory, but the pressure of the lines keeps returning to a struggle between spirit and brute control.

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Cosmology scribbled in quick strokes: black hole, next universe, silver tunnel, devil taking control at the first deep black.

The page is written as if the speaker is taking rapid dictation from a vision rather than composing stanzas. That makes the shifts between astrophysics and theology feel like a single continuous substance instead of a borrowed metaphor. The closing image — 'Spirit due still cancels with Lot' — ends the cosmology with a specific biblical exchange, which is the page's way of saying the new physics doesn't retire the old accounting.