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By Jack Joseph Smith

A POEM TO A PAINTER BEFORE: When I went to the calling that was the magic of this . horror show I saw minds winding through darkest parts . of the eternal currents into down below trailing upon twisted memories I went so slow on the screaming edge- . of my hanging lungs at the final moment when the last reded eye went into me and I caught a life in time to - 7 say I saw through men over knowledge as timeless with wisdom as an untouched tree after they had captured a . ; brain and on scalpel sharp surgical stone cut it rawe IT ALL; When I see water rolling white in the night within winding grays I think of the day that sank away to- i feelings going on the flow of men's sounds carried : alas on the stillness in time to where there would have been other men as Will could have gone beyond : toward turning teacher into brother ‘but thought of all the gravestones along the way and could I walk , there pretending I never witnessed deep dread face- - of the spirit or what would I write after again to- - again the wine went dripping from my mouth walking ; from doors of closing taverns with tears running 2 i down my-lines like fading colors of a worn out hobo's tie?” HAPPENED: Men among lost men blessing man's soul in the wild - of the black alley the world has yet to tally your - understanding and consecrate lone agony in wreaths false wrapped round the tombs they place above you yet with art I deepen my own still passing beneath . strength knowing movement gives not good leave ‘with replys

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'A POEM TO A PAINTER' with BEFORE / IT ALL / HAPPENED sections: descent into horror and surgical vision, then tavern memory, then a blessing among lost men in the alley.

The page frames painting and poetry as parallel acts of witness. Its three-part structure matters: preparation, immersion, then aftermath. The 'worn out hobo's tie' simile keeps the page tied to the collection's hobo persona even while the poem addresses another artist.


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'A POEM TO A PAINTER' with BEFORE/HAPPENED subheads: a long single paragraph of descent into darkness, then wine-dripping taverns, then 'Men among lost men blessing man's soul.'

The address to a painter argues that poetry and painting share the same threshold of witness. The 'worn out hobo's tie' simile retroactively connects the painter-addressee to the collection's title persona.