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By Jack Joseph Smith
By Jack Joseph Smith
Original Scan
AI Interpretation
'Seed' — a difficult storm-and-growth poem where seaweed, shadow, basket, goat, and fractions all move toward a 'God Damned end.'
Even after cleanup the page remains textually unstable, but the main movement is clear: emergence is described as rough, coastal, and violent rather than fertile or serene. The title turns growth into ordeal, not promise.
'Seed' - a turbulent growth-and-storm poem where 'No will went against the plan', seaweed is 'Curled ages beyond your before' off 'a three-hundred mile-storm', a 'head strong goat answered / The questions of dusk', and the movement runs 'against the plan that was finding enterance- / at the God Damned end'.
The title's promise of fertility is met by ordeal: emergence here is coastal, violent, and storm-driven rather than tender, and the recurring 'plan' presses against will, intellect ('tongue-kill intellectual taste'), and the natural world. The hinge is 'against the plan that was finding enterance- / at the God Damned end', where growth arrives only by forcing entrance into a damned terminus, and the closing 'fractions / Seen in the immediate lean / Were going to the sum' gestures at parts gathering toward a whole. This reading remains provisional because the page is textually unstable: even after scan-checked cleanup the syntax is broken and several forms ('metor', 'enterance', 'infiant', 'industral', 'place-places') sit between source spelling and unresolved OCR, so the interpretation tracks the legible drift rather than asserting a settled sense.