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By Jack Joseph Smith

Death of the Believer: When the dream has :left Evil ‘tightens-:its :shank It does not spin like druge:do on bones..and building stone- Rather you do actually for ‘the difference<in the desease-alone For the good its glory-is pulled instead of pushed: Sudden:framr sleep to conversation: any mistrust isan arrogance: As.if ite center were a nation that needed them. Into a secret: dignity only: selves:can move-with. There the- clandestine grace:of cynicism Connects. with the downward Like-being able to breathe« inia whirlpool when others - smoothed from the swimming: are-desperately: losing: memory: of the-lake: While the group conception of one~ Finding sweetness for once- above= Sees -halls-of roses:under: glassa~ As a power: to show interest in: It is joy in these-visions - Ever they:‘may--come- Be-it aa-Clam or god’ That mean your gone-

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Belief gives way to evil, disease, and cynicism, yet the mind still keeps generating seductive visions of sweetness and transcendence.

Once the dream leaves, the poem describes a world where grace has gone secret and survival depends on moving within a hidden inner dignity. Images of whirlpool, drowning, roses under glass, and breathing downward make faith feel less like uplift than a strange ability to live inside collapse. The ending refuses a clean doctrine, reducing revelation to clam or god, and turns disappearance itself into the final meaning.

Claude

'Death of the Believer': dream departs, evil hardens at the bone, grace becomes the ability to breathe in a whirlpool.

The poem defines faith by subtraction — it names what remains once the dream is gone. 'The clandestine grace of cynicism' is the most honest line on the page; it won't pretend cynicism is grace-free. The ending — 'Be it as Clam or god / That mean your gone' — refuses the choice between religious and mineral terms for the same vanishing.