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By Jack Joseph Smith
By Jack Joseph Smith
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Rain on a Budweiser and soft suburban lawns expose a landscape built over older labor, where present comfort rests on transferred coal-mining hardship.
The mood is misty, but the class memory is exact. The leaded window, stone homes, brick, and ivy are not innocent scenery; they sit on a history of extraction passed from a dreaded worker's time into the property of masters' sons. The poem compresses regional history into one wet, slightly drunken moment of recognition.
'Mount Lebanon Pennsylvania': 'It's raining on my Budweiser and I'm getting misty' while 'through my leaded window' the lawns turn 'soft over yesteryears coal.. mines transferred from a dreaded man's time to / their masters sons homes of stone, brick and / ivy...'
The mood is misty and half-drunk, but the class memory underneath is exact. The leaded window frames a softness that the poem immediately reads as an end-state: comfort 'transferred' from a miner's hard era into the masters' sons' property. 'A dreaded man's time' becoming 'masters sons homes of stone, brick and ivy' compresses generations of extraction into a single clause, with ivy literally growing over the labor history. The Budweiser and the rain are what grant the observation permission to surface - the recognition arrives in a wet, ordinary moment rather than as argument. The trailing ellipses keep the inheritance unfinished and ongoing.