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By Jack Joseph Smith
By Jack Joseph Smith
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The poem admits that bitterness in art can poison family life, then twists that violence into a bleak image of poetic love.
Hatred, gossip, and getting even are treated as habits that do real domestic damage, not glamorous emotions. The closing comparison is deliberately unsettling: poets kill like birds do with worms, yet the act is still named as love lifted toward the sky. That combination makes affection look consuming rather than gentle.
'Friendship Lost': the hatred in a poem won't help at home; poets kill like birds with worms, loving them all the way to the sky.
The poem names the specific limit of its own genre — a poem full of hate cannot earn domestic credit. The image of birds loving worms 'all the way to the sky' makes predation into a form of transit. That lets the poem both confess and excuse itself: the poets kill because that's how they get altitude.