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By Jack Joseph Smith

Friendship Lost The hatred in a poem Will get you nowhere With your wife And children While we fear forever might stop With gossip Cutting remarks Getting even So we poets kill Somewhat like birds do with worms Loving them, all the way to the sky

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The poem admits that bitterness in art can poison family life, then twists that violence into a bleak image of poetic love.

Hatred, gossip, and getting even are treated as habits that do real domestic damage, not glamorous emotions. The closing comparison is deliberately unsettling: poets kill like birds do with worms, yet the act is still named as love lifted toward the sky. That combination makes affection look consuming rather than gentle.


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'Friendship Lost': the hatred in a poem won't help at home; poets kill like birds with worms, loving them all the way to the sky.

The poem names the specific limit of its own genre — a poem full of hate cannot earn domestic credit. The image of birds loving worms 'all the way to the sky' makes predation into a form of transit. That lets the poem both confess and excuse itself: the poets kill because that's how they get altitude.