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By Jack Joseph Smith

Alcohol sweetens the terror of being alive ina Universe-that has no ending. to -tames. The beauty-of the animal, the beauty of man,. the beauty of the plantlife, .even the beauty” of the crazy seas, is that possibility exists in seeing it before some kind of mind takes it om After the iron is forged the space-ship is lost. After ‘the fuel is spent it rests'im the Earth's dust. All'the while if we glow; our star will'follow the ship we made,. Beyond the drugs we take, we will forgive ourselves for the plan we daily promise’ourselves not to keepe A Bottom Poem, Or Going Down... Does Seek

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The poem uses alcohol as a starting point for a cosmic meditation on beauty, exhaustion, and the promises people keep failing to keep.

Its first line is blunt and memorable because it does not romanticize drinking; alcohol merely sweetens terror. From there the poem opens outward toward animals, plants, seas, iron, spaceships, stars, and dust, balancing wonder against waste and spent force. The turn to self-forgiveness at the end makes the piece intimate again, as if the real journey were not into space but into living with repeated failure.

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Two-part lyric: alcohol as the sweetener of terror against an unending universe; a 'Bottom Poem' about the direction of seeking.

The first section is a cosmological apology for drinking — the page treats alcohol as a theological coping mechanism rather than a vice. 'After the iron is forged the space-ship is lost' is the line that treats entropy as the real audience. The 'Bottom Poem' fragment at the end is almost a signature — the going-down is where the looking happens.