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By Jack Joseph Smith

Severe As county Quiet as lead Less careful than cows Mistaking watchfulness for a dream No ordinary pick up The left over food would be the best there could be The upside was delicious The down side dangerous No one here likes intruders Hunger is not there area Pleasure is there thing Well we had a Dego among us He once walked through the door when he sold it before doing it We were trapped at the dumpster The first thing I thought was, how the alley smelled so good I saw there anger was as simple, as a button lost on a date So I told them there was already a body in the garbage, and in their tiping bend,- in the city you have the first time I shived a pig, And was gone

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Dumpster hunger, intrusion, alley smell, and quick anger give the poem the tense comedy of a threat remembered at close range.

The page turns scarcity, leftover food, intrusion, and alley memory into a blunt account of threat and pleasure. Its slur and violent garbage imagery make the recollection socially ugly as well as physically tense.

Claude

A scavenger's code -- 'No one here likes intruders', 'Hunger is not there area / Pleasure is there thing' -- shades into a confession of killing told with eerie calm: 'I saw there anger was as simple, / as a button lost on a date', so 'I told them there was already a body / in the garbage'. The slur 'Dego' and the alley that 'smelled so good' make the recollection socially ugly and sensory at once, and the boast closes on 'the first time I shived a pig, / And was gone' -- violence remembered as a clean exit.