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By Jack Joseph Smith

Earth This star I found, this madness I have created The endurance lives I'vve touched have shown Trees whose leaves single out bodies of stars Valleys that run corn and hybiscus across creeks, and the lonely hats bent by last by their family straws Rivers gullied off the canyons of disbelief Never caught to carry a century of dreams Flat nosed negros and drawed chin Anglo Saxions Roll eyed Spanish speaking knife fighters, and closed up thinned than a cross, wild American Indian drunks, All stand as the the trees left, never to be glossed, there words unshaken, deliberate Alone our Sun is not the judge of our end, so many years from now it will come and rap it up, our outrage plays to God, the abstract one, Convincincely the one we can not see, while my luck has me in North America: which seen is the best the planit has, and so through this we of course are fashist; afraid and stuck to our condinsation more than ever our mid western cattle and crops, we go to bed and whine our way through drawing moons, the stars tell our toil at hairdresser shops and over coffie. while some pack up the foil of a wrench, and like Dartanion go to put brotherhood back together, YET once again, will be our first time

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GPT

America is seen through stars, crops, creeks, racial and ethnic types, fear, and fascist drift, making the national portrait sprawling and accusatory.

The page builds a national and planetary indictment through landscape, racialized figures, labor, money, luck, and North America. Its handwritten YET sharpens the ending's unstable attempt to imagine brotherhood restored for the first time.


Claude

A sprawling national vision moves from landscape ('Valleys that run corn and hybiscus across creeks') into a deliberately ugly racial catalog -- 'Flat nosed negros and drawed chin Anglo Saxions', 'Roll eyed Spanish speaking knife fighters', 'wild American / Indian drunks' -- all standing 'as the the trees left'. The poem then indicts the speaker's own country: 'we of course are fashist; afraid and stuck to our / condinsation', whining 'through drawing / moons', yet ends reaching for repair, where 'like Dartanion' someone goes 'to put brotherhood back together' so that 'once / again, will be our first time'. This reading remains provisional because the page transcript is OCR-uncertain and the handwritten title-side notes are unresolved.