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By Jack Joseph Smith

I have learned a lesson here I sit, to think of you my friends I weather again: how long you could make believe I cannot go home through a word not left nearly lasting to be only of your first place or mine (may be like all of it all) In the circumference of your home putting yourself (now + then) above everything that has been written of any poem. You sit out your face among the ashes: Why is there? Or hunger? at the long lost knocks you into the beginning delicate balance.... Then fire flows.

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GPT

A handwritten fragment addresses a lesson, friends, home, belief, poems, ashes, hunger, balance, and fire, circling the difficulty of belonging and returning through language.

The page has a self-interrogating tone: the speaker asks what friends, homes, and poems make possible, while the images of ashes, hunger, balance, and fire give the fragment a stark after-the-fact feeling.


Claude

A meditative lyric addressed to a friend or companion, moving from quiet reflection to a final image of fire, weighing memory, home, and the limits of what poetry can hold.

The speaker circles questions of belonging and permanence, setting the intimacy of a shared past against abstractions like circumference and hunger, before the poem breaks into the sudden physicality of flowing fire.