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By Jack Joseph Smith

She went fallen in the ground When her love was never found She could not rise up from the drifting mud He seemed to be gone with the sorrow of a snake The universe that tells us How violent it is to be born The earth that tells me our why to die is a mistake For us who fight it is Across a Moondown for the best, it is nothing WAR, you won't stop it 300 million spanked dogs on the run

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AI Interpretation

GPT

This page begins as a lyric of burial and sorrow, then breaks into a harsher handwritten refusal of violence and fatalism.

The typed opening has a mournful fable-like quality, but the handwritten ending changes the energy. It sounds angrier, more political, and less willing to accept death or war as something settled.


Claude

`She went fallen in the ground / When her love was never found` — a snake-gone lover, the universe telling us `How violent it is to be born`, and the final coda: `WAR, you won't stop it / 300 million spanked dogs / on the run`. One of the book's few directly national-war images.