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By Jack Joseph Smith

She went fallen in the ground When her love was never found She could not rise up from the drifting mud He seemed to be gone with the sorrow of a snake The universe that tells us How violent it is to be born The earth that tells me our why to die is A MISTAKE For us who fight it is Across A Moondown For the REST, It is nothing WAR, YOU WON'T stop it 300 million spanked dogs ON THE RUN

Original Scan

AI Interpretation

GPT

This page begins as a lyric of burial and sorrow, then breaks into a harsher handwritten refusal of violence, fatalism, and war.

The typed opening has a mournful fable-like quality, but the handwritten ending changes the energy. The restored uppercase stress in `WAR, YOU WON'T stop it` and `ON THE RUN` makes the coda angrier, more political, and less willing to accept death or war as settled.

Claude

A typed fable of burial - 'She went fallen in the ground / When her love was never found', a lover 'gone / with the sorrow of a snake' - opens onto the page's argument that the universe teaches 'How violent it is to be born' while the earth calls dying 'A MISTAKE'. The handwritten coda hardens into shouted refusal: 'WAR, YOU WON'T stop it / 300 million spanked dogs / ON THE RUN', the only place in this stretch where private grief swells into a national, all-caps verdict. This reading treats the handwritten lower coda cautiously because the page transcript is mixed-quality scan-backed work.