Page 6
By Jack Joseph Smith
By Jack Joseph Smith
Original Scan
AI Interpretation
This page mixes romantic plants, thunder, Faulkner, Mississippi, Jesus, West Virginia, self-touch, music, the porch dog, and loneliness into a page that reads as both confession and margin-argument.
The base poem moves through literary memory, religion, the body, and the dog on the porch, while the handwritten additions expand childhood theology into a claim about already living half the Bible before thirty. The added phrase `of being / born` makes the universe line bodily and gives the page's cosmic reach a personal origin.
Confession knotted with literary and regional memory: 'every romantic plant / in the world comes down to the / bottom of my george', Faulkner reaching the speaker only 'because / my aunt, told me he was from Mississippi', and a child's theology - 'I did not read the Bible / because I thought Jesus / was from West Virginia'. The body keeps trying to reach itself, 'high and low / with and without music', while 'The dog is on the porch ... He propably knows loneliness / better than I'. Source spellings 'george', 'propably' are preserved. This reading remains provisional because dense handwritten revisions around the universe, porch, and loneliness lines are unresolved on the scan.