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By Jack Joseph Smith
By Jack Joseph Smith
Original Scan
AI Interpretation
This page mixes literary memory, religion, loneliness, and self-scrutiny, turning the typed poem into something half confession and half margin-argument with itself.
The base poem moves through Faulkner, Mississippi, Jesus, touch, and the dog on the porch, while the handwritten additions feel like the speaker refusing to leave the first draft alone. The result is unstable in a useful way: private thought keeps interrupting whatever more orderly poem was there before.
The Faulkner aunt from Mississippi; Jesus thought to be from West Virginia; the first half of the Bible already lived before thirty. The author's spelling `george` for gorge is preserved. The page stacks cosmology and biography without a bridge.