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By Jack Joseph Smith
By Jack Joseph Smith
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The poem turns bed, body, mine, and hidden shells into a country-song image of intimacy under pressure.
Gloves, mine work, silk, shells, forehead, stock, and the big brass bed all make the speaker's relationship feel built from objects rather than declarations. That indirectness gives the page its tension.
Intimacy assembled from hidden objects and mine-country fact. 'Alot older than passed down gloves', the speaker notes 'no one has ever had / a pair of gloves on in the mine', then describes smuggling and concealment - stuffing something 'as high as you get / up in the choossit' so they 'could search my silk forever / for the shells'. The couple is rendered as matched hardware: 'tight belly and long legs / high forhead', 'the two of us wooden stock of course', folding lover into rifle. It resolves into pure country-song image - 'A big brass bed' - with him always 'behind me' as she crosses the room.