The Best

By Jack Joseph Smith

My arms sway in the wind waiting I have many crosses in the countryside I have stream still untouched, wash my armpit and breats across I wish for him; better, I think for him He always thought I was filled with love, He was wrong; I am filled with control And I am filled with power, now I have hatred, because now the military has it Maybe it is not the military, the ones who govern; they are ugly, compared to me The drum roll, you wander a little bit further, when my hair is so distant, the one who is young and alone, go and weave your flag out of my long hair, put my breasts together and fine rifle fire

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GPT

This poem turns self-description into a power struggle, shifting from love to control to political contempt without losing its intimate heat.


Claude

Titled 'The Best', the poem speaks in a voice that is half-landscape, half-woman - arms that 'sway in the wind waiting', 'crosses in the countryside', a 'stream still untouched' to 'wash my armpit and breats across'. It corrects a man's misreading - 'He always thought I was filled with love, / He was wrong; I am filled with control / And... power... now I have / hatred' - and turns that hatred on 'the military' and 'the ones / who govern', ending in a startling command to 'weave your flag out of my long hair' over 'fine rifle / fire'.

The title's claim of supremacy is enacted, not argued: the speaker simply is the measure against which 'they are ugly, compared to me'. The poem's engine is a substitution of nouns - love swapped for control, then power, then hatred - each replacing the last without softening, so tenderness is exposed as the wrong word a man used for her. The body is continuous with the country (untouched streams, countryside crosses), which lets her offer it for mythic use: hair woven into a flag, breasts 'put... together' beside rifle fire. That closing image is both martyrdom and recruitment, the self-as-banner, and it fuses the erotic, the militant, and the contemptuous into one heat - 'The Best' as a woman who has converted misjudged love into wartime authority.