Untitled ("We knew things before men did")

By Jack Joseph Smith

We knew diaster Downwhere violence is like chalk on an old black board Rape and murder is a way of life and so is organic foood The goverment draws our guys out And it is true, they want to do it anywhere they look I would not sleep with a man or a women No one shares my bed through that dooor It winds me up saying sush to the kids, but I got a disk, of "The Outlaw Josie Weles"

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AI Interpretation

GPT

A bitter declaration of female knowledge and Appalachian violence, mixing domestic refusal with political and bodily threat.


Claude

Titled 'We knew things before men did', the body opens 'We knew diaster' in a place 'Downwhere violence / is like chalk on an old black board', where 'Rape and murder is a way of life / and so is organic foood'. The speaker refuses intimacy outright - 'I would not sleep / with a man or a women', 'No one shares my bed' - and lands on the worn domestic nerve of 'saying sush / to the kids' alongside owning 'a disk, / of "The Outlaw Josie Weles"'.

The title asserts a precedence of women's knowing, and the poem fills it with disaster as the thing known first: violence so routine it is 'like chalk on an old black board', erasable and re-written daily. The brutal yoking of 'Rape and murder' with 'organic foood' as equal 'way[s] of life' is the poem's signature move - horror and wholesomeness flattened into the same Appalachian normal. The speaker's blanket refusal of any bedmate, man or woman, reads less as preference than as a withdrawal from a world where 'The goverment draws our guys out' and predation is ambient. That the poem ends on shushing children and a scratched disc of 'The Outlaw Josie Weles' is telling: outlaw mythology and frayed motherhood are the only company she keeps, a Western about a wronged man standing in for the protection no one else provides.