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By Jack Joseph Smith

Whole frame the sun stood still on him. Whispering, summer wind touched slightly on the brink listening to the sea, autumn grabbing his body and he rose into the dew over the ravaged light. Though there was direct heat removing water, when peeking beneath mouth near sand or soil, plants brought always a feeling of mist for him. This was not a feeling like the abandonment of life, or like being only worlds out the other side. "It takes me into the earth of things," It is Animal, and now he is looking out to you. No need to get far fetched about Animal! Seen way out in the sun. It glimmers, fades, and then abets the muscles of the human race to push out and catch its tone power. Below there is sea, rolling slights. For these are the places Animal inhabits; islands, dunes, At end of desert. Where there is sea in south, or in power where the foam of salt and black may settle on sand. "The soft wind asked him to come, and he rose out of a money blanket on Madison Avenue and followed. There remained for a long time though nothing to fight, for the estate posted its sign in a check at his doorstep of the seven seas as he pushed on toward his time for decision. "When my mother wept it hurt my youth, because she was a-getting older delicate toy my father's flung from their minds as wasteful children dog. I have had not a home to lose, but my mother dreamed of falling in silk from the corner of the penthouse wall. The Animal, how- ever, is not any-poet's pit of stones. Problems may be the constant nag of wishful bliss, but I will garnish the longing pull of the beach bum possibility dreams with pitchers of rum and coke."

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GPT

This page casts Animal as a beach-and-desert consciousness, moving from elemental landscape into a rough autobiographical credo about class, family hurt, and chosen drift.

The strongest feature here is the blend of visionary landscape and self-definition. Sun, dew, sea, dunes, and Madison Avenue all become part of Animal's territory, and the page closes by rejecting inherited sorrow and literary confinement in favor of beach-bum possibility, appetite, and improvised survival.


Claude

A retrospective opening that frames the whole Animal project as 'Looking back, the long spiral distance.' The phrase is load-bearing for the manuscript — the whole narrative will be a distant remembering, not a contemporaneous report.