Page 213
By Jack Joseph Smith
By Jack Joseph Smith
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AI Interpretation
On the harbor liner, white liquor, spring wind, and a loudly dressed crowd turn Los Angeles into a floating theater of story, gossip, and display.
This page is all staging. The ship, pier, clothing, laughter, and storytelling create a vivid social panorama where every figure seems exaggerated into type while still retaining a separate nature.
The 'luxury linner' is in the harbor, and Animal and Jaqueline stand 'by the brass railing' with 'curved glasses of white liquor' as 'a spring wind blessed Los Angeles after the last of the rains,' clearing the long-beach sky even though the clouds are 'stuffed... with the junk of chemical man.' Below on the pier a crowd 'of a few women and about twenty men' bursts into 'laughter every ten seconds or so,' passing 'wine and marijuana,' each figure 'set apart from the other, as in a stage play': the 'round and booming' story teller 'announcing the results this unexpected voyage would bring,' the 'sly' dark-skinned man moving 'among the crowd that roared with lips curved for gossip,' the 'lean and handsome' yellow-haired 'athletes' who 'scoff at themselves and others.' The page is social panorama as theater, every type exaggerated yet retaining a separate nature. This reading remains provisional because substantial handwritten annotations on the page are unresolved and were omitted, though the corrections to 'round' and 'compounded' were legible and kept.