Page 221

By Jack Joseph Smith

The Rolls Royce was parked in the bush at the brink of one of the long rounded Topanga ranges. The vast Pacific Ocean spread out this day under a clean sky and untinted wavelengths from the sun. Prankster noticed a large ranch house at a dis- tance of about two hundred yards due South, and he wondered if this might be their destination. But the man who had been silently driving indicated a direction leading down a ravine. The shotgun man seemed to know where he was was going also, and Prankster and Davenport followed the two men down a thin path. Red, purple, yellow were the barries up wild, and the wind was swift and cool at the place of their decention just after the crest. At the top of crevice the wind had switched a good portion of its strength down, as they walked to- ward a medow way below, where the outline of some sort of build- ings could be seen, and as they wound further down through what was becomming more the shape and spread of a canyon, this wind funneled out and did push forcefully at their backs until Prankster felt a sensation to the possibility of being shoved under, and at the same time knew it odd to feel heat real- ized in his bones and rising to his temples. It had occurred to Prankster to ask the two men about making a check of the road that had led them there; before:

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The Rolls Royce descent turns the Topanga landscape into a staged approach to hidden power, with natural beauty and criminal choreography occupying the same terrain.

The page uses the ocean, ravine, wind, and distant buildings to make place feel active rather than scenic. Prankster is pushed physically by the wind and mentally by suspicion, so the movement down the canyon becomes another form of pressure before he can ask whether anyone checked the road behind them.

Claude

The Rolls is 'parked in the bush at the brink of one of the long rounded Topanga ranges,' the Pacific spread 'under a clean sky and untinted wavelengths from the sun,' and the descent becomes the page's whole action. The silent driver and the shotgun man lead Prankster and Davenport 'down a thin path' past 'Red, purple, yellow... barries up wild' toward 'a medow way below' where 'the outline of some sort of buildings could be seen.' The wind does the work of dread - funneling 'forcefully at their backs until Prankster felt a sensation to the possibility of being shoved under,' while he finds it 'odd to feel heat realized in his bones and rising to his temples.' The page closes on the suspicion he never voices: whether to 'ask the two men about making a check of the road that had led them there,' geography itself tightening into menace.