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By Jack Joseph Smith

they were with his figure up out of the canyoned valley. Prankster then left Davenport and Driver, and went to stand with arms folded at the far West side of the circle. There near the outside of the medow, the wind turned thin branched twigs, and bunched weed tumbled every so often with the shift- ing. Blackman came across the last hill before a dip and then a slope up to the peak would take him to where he imagined Shotgun Man would be standing, but a sudden flash saw him spot Shotgun coming down the last slope toward him. Because the distance be- tween the two men was not extreamly far, Blackman knew it strange that his good eyesight was not distinguishing features on Shotgun's moon face. Quick- ly though the image of breaking down sculptured Gold artifacts with white fire substantiated his convict- ions; and he recognized that the features of Shot- gun's face had been melted flat from fear. "So the licenced monsters have come again," he spoke aloud to himself. "This time we will all def- end; my body, and their minds." He did not pick his pace up into a run, but steady timed his shoulders and spine bowed out in a gate assured to powerful animals in danger.

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The moment Blackman sees Shotgun's altered face, the deal becomes a confrontation with state violence, betrayal, and inevitable collision.

The image of melted features is crucial. It turns fear into visible damage and lets Blackman's response feel not merely strategic but mythic, as if he is reading doom directly off another man's body. His vow to defend with his body against their minds frames the encounter as both physical and psychic combat.


Claude

Prankster withdraws 'to stand with arms folded at the far West side of the circle' among 'bunched weed' that 'tumbled... with the shifting,' while Blackman crosses the hills toward where he expects Shotgun. The page turns on perception: at no 'extreamly far' distance Blackman finds it 'strange that his good eyesight was not distinguishing features on Shotgun's moon face,' until the image 'of breaking down sculptured Gold artifacts with white fire' tells him the features 'had been melted flat from fear.' That sight converts the drug deal into history - 'So the licenced monsters have come again,' he says aloud, vowing 'This time we will all defend; my body, and their minds.' He does not run but holds 'a gate assured to powerful animals in danger,' the encounter reframed from commerce into a confrontation with sanctioned violence.