Page 267

By Jack Joseph Smith

"spitting up, it was also memory." "It's always one more day." "Did the man catch his bus?" "You would ask that kind of a question Animal? No, I told him about some bargins at the market, and he went shopping." "But even the bargain basement isn't a butterfly?" Intoned the frown of Animal; "I'd like the wings Animal, but quite frankly... I don't care about the pretty colors." "Do you see Colonel? Wings, ghosts, money; they are all very thin, and they float Los Angeles." "they don't dare stand on the corners." "I'll tell ya' what Animal; I'll start a construct- ion business, and hire all the Jesus Freaks." "They'd do praying for your dismissal." "Nothing like strong fiction for a union, and I won't call them any names." It was dark outside now, and the electric red and blue had switched on, Strange shadows, Almost there, and almost not. Faces had to be pale, or blotter white blotched upon a suntan from sleephiding. It was good laughing with rum, and what else with O'Mahoney's and business;

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AI Interpretation

GPT

This page turns comic tavern talk into a critique of commerce, image, opportunism, and Animal's visible reaction, then lets the scene darken into electric shadows, liquor, and business talk.

The page keeps joking about buses, bargains, butterflies, Animal's frown, wings, money, and Jesus Freaks, but those jokes are doing real thematic work. They expose how cheap vision, business, union talk, spiritual posture, liquor, and O'Mahoney's business world all blur together, and by the close the electric shadows make the exchange feel more uneasy than casual.

Claude

A tavern exchange drifts through buses, 'bargins at the market,' and the refrain 'even the bargain basement isn't a butterfly,' Animal frowning over wings he would take though he doesn't 'care about the pretty colors.' The Colonel's mock plan to 'start a construction business, and hire all the Jesus Freaks' meets Animal's quip that 'They'd do praying for your dismissal,' and the talk settles that 'Wings, ghosts, money; they are all very thin, and they float Los Angeles... they don't dare stand on the corners.' Outside, 'electric red and blue' throws 'Strange shadows, Almost there, and almost not' over faces 'blotter white blotched upon a suntan from sleephiding' - the book closing on comic drift soured into uneasy neon. This reading remains provisional because crowded handwritten overlays and lower-page annotations are unresolved.