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By Jack Joseph Smith
By Jack Joseph Smith
Original Scan
AI Interpretation
This page treats grace, music, sight, drink, and loss as things that fail to arrive cleanly, leaving the speaker in a state of incompletion, search, and private endurance.
The retained `will`, `lick wick`, canceled `of oneself`, handwritten `is drink`, and `Find` sharpen the page's practical, bodily register. The poem keeps asking how one stays alone and keeps moving when perception itself becomes a burden.
'The grace it takes' treats art and vision as temptations to be resisted. 'We never took music / to our ears, or got to be jealous of its strings,' and even hearing it - 'HEAR US NOW' - 'will dull us to forgetfullness.' 'Visions are troubble,' all forward sight 'As incomplete / As the donkey before the cart.' The poem's test is endurance: 'can you stAY alone lick wick / and go across time,' since 'Letting life away is drink / When loss is your own kind.' It ends on a hard figure of finality, 'A yield that sorry said / Has no fold.' This reading remains provisional because the page is OCR-uncertain and flagged needs-followup.