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By Jack Joseph Smith
By Jack Joseph Smith
Original Scan
AI Interpretation
This revised muskrat page pushes the animal image toward judgment and reckoning, giving the creature a heavier sense of pressure and intention.
The restored capitalization in the lower continuation makes the handwritten layer more forceful. Instead of merely seeing, the muskrat now arrives amid pounding, purpose, and the doing of the calves, which makes the whole scene feel more ritualized and ominous.
An extended, more ominous muskrat poem. The opening repeats the sketch -- 'And there he came about; that Muskrat; / Licking his chops with spring water' -- then darkens it: 'Putting my cousin right into the hole / just made for a farm / Eyes like Eienstien.' The handwritten continuation (restored per scan review) escalates the creature from observer to agent: 'All pounding with / A purpose,' and 'about the doing / of the CALVES, / This muskrat had / COME to recon with / under / the / ground.' The capitalized 'CALVES' and 'COME,' and the preserved handwritten 'recon' (kept rather than normalized to 'reckon'), give the animal a ritual, judging force, its descent staged down the broken short lines into the earth. This reading remains provisional because the page is mixed-quality with needs_manual_review set, and the lower overwritten passage around 'under' and nearby crossed text stays unresolved. Spelling 'Eienstien' is kept as written.