What is Left

By Jack Joseph Smith

The stroke of a pen is not a sword Even it's evil is to quiet for blood All dressed up with no place to go Bring Jack London along with your pain Leave the rhyme as whim, my conclusions, this cry for god keeps me less in my stomach, leaves me like leaves, soon unattractive, and used I am sorry about any dimness I apoligize about the horror I am the one who took your son I am the one who raped your daughter I am the narsistic brillance of time I am the gag on your life I am the danger that worships Never made a slip, go ahead and find the dagger I have thought about telling your movies, that there was a zero through the soul It is trite; you need no motive You have lost your will; Shame when you have no goal

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GPT

A furious poem of accusation and self-implication, where art, violence, shame, and spectacle all collapse into one speaking voice.


Claude

A poem that begins by doubting the power of writing - 'The stroke of a pen is not a sword,' its evil 'to quiet for blood' - and then weaponizes that doubt into a confessional assault. The voice claims monstrous crimes in the first person - 'I am the one who took your son / I am the one who raped your daughter ... I am the narsistic brillance of time' - and ends by turning the indictment on the listener: 'You have lost your will; / Shame when you have no goal.'

The poem stages a deliberate descent from literary self-pity into self-accusation so extreme it becomes a kind of theater. The early image - the writer 'All dressed up with no place to go,' invoking 'Jack London,' watching his conclusions leave him 'like leaves, soon unattractive, / and used' - is a portrait of art's exhaustion. Out of that exhaustion the speaker assumes the mask of the worst possible 'I,' the rapist, the murderer, 'the danger that worships,' daring the reader to 'find the dagger' that isn't there. Whether these confessions are literal or a performance of pure menace, the poem refuses to let the speaker stand clean outside the horror he names. The final pivot is the cruelest: having indicted himself, he indicts you - the spectacle was 'trite,' you 'need no motive,' and the real shame is having 'no goal.' What is left, the title's answer, is accusation with nowhere left to land but on everyone.