Alaska

By Jack Joseph Smith

There at daybreak Almost at one of the two tips of the world I saw four suns I was standing outside of a whore house, about fifty mile direct North of Seward I have at least receinty been on the side of those who say it dosen't matter where you are to appreciate glammor However, this is over the top Inside the teek the velvet was thick The bar short and curved The women were tall and black

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A northern travel scene that treats distance, vice, and spectacle as part of the same threshold experience, where arrival means entering exaggeration.


Claude

'Alaska' opens at 'daybreak' near 'one of the two tips of the world' with the impossible sight of 'four suns', then immediately grounds that vision in a precise vulgar coordinate: standing outside a whorehouse 'about fifty mile direct North of Seward'. The speaker concedes he has lately sided with those who say location 'dosen't matter' to appreciate 'glammor', only to overturn it - 'However, this is over the top' - and the closing interior of thick velvet, a 'short and curved' bar, and 'tall and black' women confirms that here place does matter after all.

The poem works by yoking the cosmic to the carnal and refusing to rank them. The visionary 'four suns' and the brothel are reported in the same flat, eyewitness tone, so the miracle and the dive become two faces of a single frontier extremity. The speaker's stated indifference to place is the position the poem exists to break: he has named Seward, named the mileage, named the velvet, because at the tip of the world excess - of light, of vice, of beauty - is local and specific, not portable. The retained misspellings 'receinty', 'dosen't', 'glammor', and 'teek' keep the voice rough and spoken, an untutored witness reporting wonders he does not bother to polish.