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By Jack Joseph Smith
By Jack Joseph Smith
Original Scan
AI Interpretation
The page moves from thumb, plums, squid, beads, motor, sail, sea hawks, and coyotes into coffee, a fallen top, gloves, lucky rain, and Christ.
The reviewed text keeps the page's odd sea logic intact: bodily images and nautical motion slide into comic animal confusion and then into a blunt religious closure.
Section 'IX' keeps to the open water, sizing things up - 'To big to be squid fine enough to be beads' - and noting how the crew must 'Split motor and sail with time.' Its comedy is in the bird politics: 'these sea hawks think their Generals,' yet 'they believe themselves cayotes,' while the men just wonder 'how long has it been since anybody had coffie.' The mood tips downward - 'whatever we want to call the top just went down,' 'Put on the gloves,' 'Danger during lucky rain' - before a blunt religious arrival, 'And now it's Christ / Leaving it that way,' with 'Constintly,' 'coffie,' 'Arn't,' and 'cayotes' preserved.