Page 25
By Jack Joseph Smith
By Jack Joseph Smith
Original Scan
AI Interpretation
The page contrasts birds, tropical uncleanness, childhood, prehistoric sky imagination, and trading places with madness, then turns through a handwritten alley/cat/lady image toward myth, strangled power, laughter, and being a misfit across the Serria Madra, South Seas, and elsewhere.
The corrected text makes the page's movement clearer: a prose memory of looking up and down at birds gives way to a handwritten fear image, then to a warning about transcendence, inheritance, and the cost of misfit identity. The restored STRANGLED and South Seas And Elsewhere notes make the lower coda harsher and more geographically scattered.
A prose meditation in a bird's-eye voice: 'There is no cleanliness in the tropics,' yet 'these kids down there / are busy snatching us birds out of the sky,' while the speaker, whose 'growing up / was more down to earth, swamp like,' is now 'switched to the prehistoric' and would 'trade places / with this madness in a minute.' It breaks into a verse address to a son - 'You will be afraid of every alley when / painting / A CAT / with A / lady,' 'You will never be allowed to pass myth on to your children / STRANGLED' - concluding that 'being a misfit across the Serria Madra / South Seas And Elsewhere / is worth it. Son.' This reading remains provisional because the page is flagged needs-followup; 'recon'ed' and 'Serria Madra' are kept as written.