Page 29
By Jack Joseph Smith
By Jack Joseph Smith
Original Scan
AI Interpretation
This page is a damaged but resonant lyric about friendship, drunkenness, wit, Nenis Nin, the passing of silver, bridges, gold, and music pressed toward VOID.
The page survives through its oppositions: silver and gold, clean and wild, music and ear, Great song and VOID. The restored `the passing of` insertion clarifies one of its middle pivots, but the handwritten layer still resists final reading.
A page of single-line stanzas, half-elegy and half-ars-poetica, opening 'HE SAID HE WAS, / My friend, must spinn it to cleanth' and invoking 'The love of Nenis Nin WE KNEW, AFTER TIME.' Its aphorisms set art against purity - 'To kill is good as gold,' 'Clean is not necesxarly good,' 'Great song without VOID,' 'Music withou ear' - and it breaks off on 'NEVER clearly done, / while gouze,' refusing a finished close. This reading remains provisional because the page is mixed-band and flagged needs-followup, with names and final words like 'Nenis Nin' and 'gouze' uncertain in the transcript.