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By Jack Joseph Smith
I am going to take her to Alberta
It is the last song that ever danced for me
To the lake LOUISE
A star for a star for sure
Mov'in Day is a great tune
With no lone wanderings
Silence is alive to help me out
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Alberta, Lake LOUISE, stars, moving day, and living silence shape this page into a spare departure lyric.
The handwritten `LOUISE` insertion makes the lake specific without smoothing the page into travel writing. The poem moves outward, but its music remains bruised: the last song, no lone wanderings, and silence alive as reluctant company.
Claude
A spare departure lyric: 'I am going to take her to Alberta' becomes 'the last song that ever danced for me,' aimed 'To the lake LOUISE' under 'A star for a star for sure.' Against the denser surrounding pages, this one travels light - 'Mov'in Day is a great tune / With no lone wanderings' - and lets 'Silence is alive to help me out' close it on a note of company found in quiet rather than in talk.