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By Jack Joseph Smith

one another. if you have your sled going fast enough down one hill, you may go half way up the other one. Now that will be enough talk. I'm able to hear your father getting ready to come down. My father looked happy wiffing fried crisp potatoes and onions and bacon. And I could see their aroma drifting across that kitchen kind of air. My mother pushed the potatoes and onions to the side of the skillet with the spatula, and lifted the bacon out on to paper towels; dropping two eggs into the remaining grease. We were greeted by my father, while my mother spooned the grease over the yokes of his eggs. "Good morning mom. Good morning Michael." My mother said, it's time for the bathroom Michael. Now hurry up. Your father is ready for his breakfast. We used the same small table and chair morning after morning, and there was always a feeling of a rhythm I must follow. I finished my orange juce and hummed my way out of the kitchen through the little square-wooden hall, with big coats hanging for winter in the opened closet. There was a big mirror there with two moveable sides that hung over an antique wall desk. I would glance at myself walking by it and then flip my fine hair back walking into the living room. Running up the stairs I heard her call, nursery school in fifteen minutes; and don't make your father late for work. Hurry Michael, your fathers finished his breakfast. I buttoned my knickers with my but on the bannister coming down the stairs, and was checked for warmpth and neatness. My mother opened the door to frost and soft thin snow left from the night. My father was in the car with the windshield wipers wapping the window corners and the steam struggling from the

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Breakfast with bacon, potatoes, eggs, mirrors, coats, and nursery-school hurry turns a snowy morning into a strict family rhythm led by both parents.

The kitchen is dense with smell and movement, and the child's place inside it is already patterned by repetition: the same table, the same chair, the same sequence toward the bathroom, stairs, bannister, and door. Even the hall mirror and winter coats feel enlisted in that rhythm, making routine seem both intimate and disciplinary.

Claude

The mother finishes explaining Hickey's Hill - 'if you have your sled going fast enough down one hill, you may go half way up the other' - then cuts off talk as the father comes down. Breakfast is pure sensory ritual: 'fried crisp potatoes and onions and bacon', two eggs dropped 'into the remaining grease', the grease spooned over the yokes, and his greeting 'Good morning mom. Good morning Michael.' The child obeys 'a rhythm I must follow', glancing at the hall mirror to 'flip my fine hair back', buttoning his knickers on the bannister, checked 'for warmpth and neatness' before the door opens on frost and his father's steaming car.