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By Jack Joseph Smith
By Jack Joseph Smith
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Baseball bats appear and a circle forms around the narrator and Thomas, but the showdown turns unexpectedly comic as Thomas's woman screams for him to stomp the white boy and both men begin to recognize how ridiculous the whole scene has become.
Violence pauses long enough for a brief mutual recognition to break the ritual of the crowd. The exchange with Thomas punctures the race-charged seriousness around them and lets absurdity do what threat alone cannot.
Bats appear and a crowd forms a ring he distrusts ('I wanted / plenty of back room'), and the narrator calls the brawl down to single combat - 'I'll take the big boy on.' This time Thomas moves faster, scurrying 'fast as a little piggy' to the high ground, while his 'women' chants 'Stomp that white boy, Thomas.' The fight dissolves into deadpan comedy as the two men, looking into each other's eyes, trade words over the chant: the narrator's 'we're pretty redundant' gets corrected - 'The word I'd use, is ridiculous' - and Thomas surveys the 'big dummies... standing there watching us, with serious faces,' absurdity doing what the threat could not.