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By Jack Joseph Smith

He came low meeting my eyes, with his fingers in the grass supporting his body like a halfback. Two, I answered. My father nodding his leaf shadowed bald head rising, with the sun singing it's acknowledgment to my blindness, through the leaves, branches, and flowers of the Dog Wood trees. He was asking my mother, calling her Mary, if she wanted to go in, but she could only say so sweetly how beautifully shiney the Rhodendrum were. They looked like orchid's, under our front small cut diamond shaped windows waiting to be pinned on a soft girl after a fall football game. Let's be walking around to the back yard Rudy, before we go in. So we walked past the garage-door, around to the small sidewalk, that ran to the side of our home, where the neighbors follage was close comeing over a falling rusty fence. My father could touch the rain trough hanging from the shingled garage roof slanting so low. Me coming around to the back brown French kitchen door; and up close trying to jump up and see through it's squared window pains of back of the house mystery. My father picking me up and putting me away from the door near the fence and follage. He was watching my mother walking into the back yard, when I heard him say, now try. My eyes jumping level with the beginnings of the window pains and me feeling big, but seeing nothing. I jumped again and saw everything become nothing. I jumped again and again, my eyes flashing with the windows. I had jumped alot, when I looked up at my father speaking; Did you see anything? Yes. I just know I did. I just know I did.

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AI Interpretation

GPT

Father and child circle the house together, counting dogwoods and arriving at the back door where the child jumps again and again trying to glimpse the mystery inside.

The writing stays close to scale and sensation: leaves, rhododendrons, fence rust, rain trough, window panes, the lift of the father's hands. What matters is not whether anything is actually seen through the glass, but the child's insistence that vision and discovery have already begun.


Claude

The father crouches 'like a halfback' to meet the boy's eyes, names Mary's rhododendrons that 'looked like orchid's' fit 'to be pinned on a soft girl after a fall football game', and leads the walk around the garage to the brown French kitchen door. There he lifts the child to the window's 'squared window pains of back of the house mystery' and says 'now try': the boy jumps and 'saw everything become nothing', then jumps 'again and again, my eyes flashing with the windows'. Asked if he saw anything, he insists 'Yes. I just know I did. I just know I did.' - the child's faith in vision outrunning what the glass actually shows.