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By Jack Joseph Smith
By Jack Joseph Smith
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Father and child circle the house together, counting dogwoods and arriving at the back door where the child jumps again and again trying to glimpse the mystery inside.
The writing stays close to scale and sensation: leaves, rhododendrons, fence rust, rain trough, window panes, the lift of the father's hands. What matters is not whether anything is actually seen through the glass, but the child's insistence that vision and discovery have already begun.
The father crouches 'like a halfback' to meet the boy's eyes, names Mary's rhododendrons that 'looked like orchid's' fit 'to be pinned on a soft girl after a fall football game', and leads the walk around the garage to the brown French kitchen door. There he lifts the child to the window's 'squared window pains of back of the house mystery' and says 'now try': the boy jumps and 'saw everything become nothing', then jumps 'again and again, my eyes flashing with the windows'. Asked if he saw anything, he insists 'Yes. I just know I did. I just know I did.' - the child's faith in vision outrunning what the glass actually shows.