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By Jack Joseph Smith

became Little Lord Falunterroy with huge doors being put open for me by stout and shoulder braided men addressing us with, good evening Master and Mister and Misses. Elegant wood carved from walls in the form of furniture and a long red rug we went walking on forever through tall brimmed nosed men and women all with painted shoes and fancy hats fading in and out of their movement under spinning chandliers that were crystal with a drop of yellow flickering within the bending glass. Good evening. Good evening. Yes, I'll have four Corona Corona's. A good cigar sir. Sure is. Have a nice evening sir. Sure will. Thank you, I thank you. And off and walking again with this group of pretense-ladies ruffled with a giddyness running across their lips of attempted distance and through velvet drapes into a dinning hall of laced tables and steaming trays turning and turning through heads seemingly sniffing almost above the high hands of dignified waiters and me again looking up at the backs of buldging necks belonging to my fathers earless business friends. We would be seated by four or five waiters, but I could see that they were really bowing to themselves. They had an inward grin watching everybody trying to be just what they were expected not to be. Ha ha, there is a fool, let me play with him awhile. Maybe his wife will talk of me over tea and games. I would tame my amazement down to their level and answer their expected questions, that my mother and father smiled tightly on the tips. The waiters and I were the live puppets, but what if we should cut the strings? What if I should pick up a plate and put it upside down on my head? What if a waiter should say no? What if? Ha ha, and my fathers business friends always had a question on their faces. They were always so nonchalant, when ordering for their wives. And so unaware, when the waiters spoke in their native tongue. No wonder.

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Entering the clubs with parents and business people, the child moves through carved wood, chandeliers, waiters, cigars, velvet drapes, and dining-room ceremony while feeling adults arrange themselves like puppets around money and display.

The page sees class performance very sharply, especially in the doors held open, the overpolite greetings, and the adults trying to inhabit a role they have paid for. Waiters and the child briefly align as the only figures who seem aware of the stiffness and unreality governing the room.

Claude

The private club is staged as theater of class pretense: 'Little Lord Falunterroy' walking the 'long red rug' through 'spinning chandliers', the clipped greetings ('Good evening. Good evening. Yes, I'll have four Corona Corona's') exposed as scripted hollowness. The boy sees the waiters 'really bowing to themselves' with 'an inward grin watching everybody trying to be just what they were expected not to be', and aligns himself with them as fellow 'live puppets' who fantasize cutting the strings - 'What if I should pick up a plate and put it upside down on my head?' The 'earless business friends' and their nonchalant ordering complete the portrait of a paid-for ritual the child reads straight through.