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By Jack Joseph Smith

7 embrace~that only comes with an endings Beyond the vines two more brick houses-sentnoled anouther-tree shadowed street, and watched’ us pass across the shade-into a leng green lawn curved with gardens graceing: itssbody and’ a willow tree dropping its-wishes:om a~ fish pond? We -¢3398, walked to the far deep corner of the yard, and up small’ stone steps. Me looking-inte the water and seeing- Lilly's for -beds: under falling brown peddlés-and goldfish who would die every winters Around us were pine teness for fail-time pine-cones fer Christmas, .and' a-white-and . high: Sycomore -over’ still) sciiatleat oan ‘He-wedked “with aay 2g acsentt. of follage I ls Yailed porcli and a gee on saying,, it's so beautiful around to the front par, of our-new home againg | T thought ‘my mother would’want to walk all the way around againj' WE didn’ té. We went in, while-my father held opem she big: thick wooden: door?. { \ | | : | 1 i i ; | | {

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The walk reaches a fish pond under willow and sycamore shade, then closes with the family turning back toward the house through a garden so beautiful the child wants to circle it again.

Some lines are rough, but the clearest image is the far corner of the yard as a place of lilies, dead-winter goldfish, pine cones, and layered trees. The desire to keep walking around the home again gives the scene a child's sense of abundance, as if the property could keep generating new edges.


Claude

The tour of the new yard closes with a willow over a goldfish pond and pine cones for Christmas — the first of many pages that treat the property as a small, sacred cartography to be memorized before anything is lost.