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By Jack Joseph Smith
By Jack Joseph Smith
Original Scan
AI Interpretation
This page starts the cab-driving Los Angeles frame and turns movement itself into a small moral comparison.
Its final handwritten turn matters. The page suggests that ascent and descent are not just physical directions but different kinds of effort.
Numbered '1.' like a chapter opening, this page splits the Gibbons across two coasts at once: he is 'driving a cab in and about and all around Shenley Park in / Pittsburgh' even as 'this Gibbons tells / a story' from 'Santa Monica.' The cab's looping motion ('in and about and all around') mirrors the narrative's drift between Pennsylvania and California, and the handwritten close - 'Easier going up / Then going down' - turns that movement into a flat, unsettling proverb about effort and decline.