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By Jack Joseph Smith
1.
He is driving a cab in and about and all around Shenley Park in
Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania. Through the trees this Gibbons tells
a story. He is in Los Angeles in Santa Monica.
Easier going up
Then going down
By Jack Joseph Smith
Original Scan
AI Interpretation
This page starts the cab-driving Los Angeles frame and turns movement itself into a small moral comparison.
Its final handwritten turn matters. The page suggests that ascent and descent are not just physical directions but different kinds of effort.
A cab-in-Shenley-Park setup where the Gibbons is simultaneously driving the cab and telling the story in Santa Monica, ending on 'Easier going up / Then going down' — a two-coast structural pivot for the draft.