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By Jack Joseph Smith
By Jack Joseph Smith
Original Scan
AI Interpretation
This fragment mixes class talk, marital refusal, and self-fashioning, then closes by turning hardness into an ethic.
With the restored physical details, the page feels less like loose boasting and more like active character construction. The Sweet Gibbon appears as a social and bodily ideal at once, while the final insistence on doing what is hard gives the whole passage a self-forging quality.
'How beautiful is the / Sweet Gibbon' — the underlined title that anchors the whole draft. The Gibbons's father-and-wife explanation of who he cannot be ('my wife is in the / literature. She is not going / to marry a cab driving beat'), then the football-shouldered physical portrait in the white jersey with the blue number, closing on the self-imposed instruction 'I will do something that / is hard.' Portrait + vow.