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By Jack Joseph Smith
By Jack Joseph Smith
Original Scan
AI Interpretation
This note page condenses the larger sequence into a series of short propositions about dwelling, memory, growth, and freedom.
Because the page is structured as numbered cues rather than full lyric blocks, it reads like a scaffold of core ideas. What ties them together is a concern with rightful place: where one may live, how people may grow, what should be remembered, and how freedom might exist without becoming another kind of game or performance. The corrected Huedew cue keeps the source of life as something flowing rather than hidden.
A cue sheet that distills the script's keepers into numbered propositions. The timestamps gather the surviving lines like beads on a string: '214 - Need A man ask where he / may live?'; '218 - Where is there a colony for / the benefit of family?'; the gardener's '223 - If my garden Earth is red, / then my crops will be green'; '232 - Where is the course of time, / And with it people may grow.'; '241 - The castle of the crawfish / should be a universal memory.'; '246 - HERE, the source of Life is never / forbidden, though it flow / through Huedew.'; and the closing freedom, '269 - Children are free to play, / they have not to play games / to be free.' The page reads as the script thinking in headlines about dwelling, growth, memory, and unforced play.