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By Jack Joseph Smith

THEY WERE drinking gin and I bickering About bit parts. Saying I don't remember Is a really bad way to start a story, but that part is true. This little dog and I would be winding our way down these golden cliffs, and we would see tunnels. Short ones, so that we would always meat one another end to end real quick. Walking on that beach thank God I hadn't read T.S. Eliot. Seeing, looking was a dart; life was spacific. These Sunset Cliffs were streight up sand stone, big basecfinles growing up, approach- able, but not wanting to be touched. This was not a thought, it just appeared that way. Of course I was young, and in any light or lack thereof, the only ghost I knew was in my right hand. I gazed when I walk as if I was on camera as if I would know. The shimmering over the last of the sea is new. Turning from the colors this doggie is my buddy. But there will be no falling back from up there, he is scragely, and can bite a rock, a be amused with bending one knee at a time. Alot of vocka and gin where I thought about it.

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This page turns a memory of drink, cliffs, and a dog into a restless meditation on youth, perception, and the urge to stylize experience while living it.

The writing is vivid because it never settles into one register. It is comic, self-aware, Beat-adjacent, coastal, and slightly haunted all at once. The speaker's eye keeps converting landscape into performance, as if seeing itself on camera, but the dog and the cliffs keep the page physical enough to resist pure pose. That tension between lived moment and self-mythologizing gives the prose its charge.

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A Sunset Cliffs prose memory that opens by admitting 'Saying I dont remember Is a really bad way to start a story.' The narrator and a 'scragely' little dog wind down 'golden cliffs' through short tunnels, the speaker grateful he 'hadn't read T.S. Eliot' so that 'Seeing, looking was a dart; life was spacific.' He watches himself 'as if I was on camera,' the only ghost he knew 'in my right hand,' the sea shimmering 'new.' The misspellings ('streight,' 'spacific,' 'vocka') stay intact, and the page frames youth as pure unreflective perception, bracketed by gin and vodka.