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By Jack Joseph Smith
By Jack Joseph Smith
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This page turns queer intimacy, embodiment, and softness into a deliberately unashamed lyric of mutual ease.
Its language is explicit, but the dominant feeling is not provocation so much as tenderness and physical reassurance. Dress, shoulders, back, cot, stomachs, and the veranda in Honolulu all create a domestic sensuality that resists shame and refuses 'degradingly bad language.' The page is strongest where it treats bodily closeness as a form of peace rather than scandal.
A standalone poem titled Homosexuality. The speaker imagines sharing anatomy as a perfect eternity until penetration, describes shoulders letting a dress curve, and settles into a morning on a Honolulu veranda with a bumblebee. The page is flowers who thought alone, a tender same-sex pastoral lodged inside the book's ship-to-port movement.