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By Jack Joseph Smith
By Jack Joseph Smith
Original Scan
AI Interpretation
The page combines sea-floor imagery, cruise reflection, literary drift, and later handwritten travel notes into a layered notebook-like composition.
What is interesting here is the coexistence of registers: a drafted poem about ocean depth and death at sea, then the marginal presence of `Oct. 1968`, Robin Lee Graham, and Hawaiian references. The page does not settle into a single finished artifact; it preserves a mind thinking by overlay, where voyage, reading, and revision keep interrupting each other.
A wave-math aside and a short stanza. Some waves break at twice the height between sea surface and ocean floor. Then a ship-life lyric: gloveless in the South Seas, thinking about death on a cruise has nothing to do with floating with porkchops, a fourteen-year-old sailor singing into National Geographic, a Captain who loved Ayn Rand. A reference to Robin Lee Graham and the Hawaiian kahuna closes.