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By Jack Joseph Smith

Had worn thin the nerves of the men From Cidney to Manzanillo, Mexico Death drove the smell the whole go That's how I got on at the Manzanillo dock The ships doctor and six seamen had got off in a state of shock I remember the 18,000 coming down the planks to the brutal pens With the stench of the ship Steaming inches of their hides from flocks of other remains left behind while I joined the stockmen insane From what must have been some sort of blame hidden in my humanity Now we stood on the dung Hero's very much unsung experiencing the pity in tragedy With that last sheep (Below our helpless hands) Which I called Mam The head stockman Was a man frightened by power which is why he had been pushed to report on bare bones of bullock of Hellish resemblance

Original Scan

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AI Interpretation

GPT

The page returns to the ship's death smell, the Manzanillo dock, shocked crewmen, brutal pens, dung, and the surviving sheep.

The stable draft lines make this page a handwritten variant of the opening catastrophe: worn nerves, Manzanillo, shock, stench, stockmen, dung, and the last sheep all repeat the moral pressure of the typed page.


Claude

A handwritten draft variant of the opening catastrophe, looser and more broken than the typed version. The familiar markers recur in shorter stanzas: 'Death drove the smell the whole go,' 'I got on at the / Manzanillo dock,' 'The ships doctor and six seamen / had got off in a state of shock,' the '18,000 / coming down the planks / to the brutal pens.' The speaker again joins 'the stockmen / insane,' stands 'on the dung' among 'Hero's very much unsung,' and reaches 'that last sheep / (Below our helpless hands) / Which I called Mam.' The 'head stockman' returns as 'a man frightened by power,' here pushed to 'report on bare bones of bullock / of Hellish resemblance.' This reading stays provisional because the page is a mixed quality band, scan review is needs-followup, and dense handwriting remains uncertain.