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By Jack Joseph Smith
By Jack Joseph Smith
Original Scan
AI Interpretation
The page returns to the ship's death smell, the Manzanillo dock, shocked crewmen, brutal pens, dung, and the surviving sheep.
The stable draft lines make this page a handwritten variant of the opening catastrophe: worn nerves, Manzanillo, shock, stench, stockmen, dung, and the last sheep all repeat the moral pressure of the typed page.
A handwritten draft variant of the opening catastrophe, looser and more broken than the typed version. The familiar markers recur in shorter stanzas: 'Death drove the smell the whole go,' 'I got on at the / Manzanillo dock,' 'The ships doctor and six seamen / had got off in a state of shock,' the '18,000 / coming down the planks / to the brutal pens.' The speaker again joins 'the stockmen / insane,' stands 'on the dung' among 'Hero's very much unsung,' and reaches 'that last sheep / (Below our helpless hands) / Which I called Mam.' The 'head stockman' returns as 'a man frightened by power,' here pushed to 'report on bare bones of bullock / of Hellish resemblance.' This reading stays provisional because the page is a mixed quality band, scan review is needs-followup, and dense handwriting remains uncertain.