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By Jack Joseph Smith

Hitch hiking to Sonoita, Mexico via Mexicali, so Neil and Jack wouldn't get lo.st in Baja on their way down to Mazatlan. The hot and uncivilized border, Americans and Mexicans as well. Hitchhiking along the basin of the Sierra Madre. The gutar. The heavens filled with stars. The pick up truck. Jack going blind from red dog. The healing by the Mexican doctor in the one horse village. The constant memory of the first ride by the mad American. A convertable representive of the United States image. Hard alcohol was to stay away from. Even Tequila. Mazatlan; The Mazatlan hotel; hard wood up and down, all around. Afraid to dance with lovely girls in pink and white. The breaker wall against the cobble stone street, to and fro, connecting with the town, The beach in cove, Jack gazing in disbelief of the beauty; Neil, with his dad's portable typewriter gift bought by Francisco. Tiping sixty words a minute; doing push ups. 75¢ or centavos a night for high ceilings and a courtyard. Approached with Marihuana by two black haired American speaking young men,

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This page turns the road to Mazatlan into a sequence of border heat, trucks, stars, illness, beauty, and portable ambition.

The prose keeps traveling between hardship and wonder. Hot border crossings, blindness, tequila avoidance, typewriters, push ups, and beach beauty all occupy the same field. The result is a portrait of movement where glamour is never separate from bodily risk.

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A dense, telegraphic itinerary toward Mazatlan, written as a stack of noun-phrases. The road runs 'to Sonoita ... via Mexicali' so 'Neil and Jack / wouldn't get lo.st in Baja', along 'the basin of the Sierra Madre', with 'The gutar', stars, a pickup truck, 'Jack going blind / from red dog', 'The healing by the Mexican doctor in the one horse / village', and 'the first ride by the mad American', a 'convertable representive of the United States image'. Mazatlan arrives as sensory detail: a hotel of 'hard wood up and down', being 'Afraid to dance with lovely girls in pink and white', and Neil with 'his dad's portable typewriter gift bought by / Francisco', 'Tiping sixty words a minute; doing push ups' at '75 cents or / centavos a night'. It breaks off mid-clause as two men approach 'with Marihuana'. Source spellings 'lo.st', 'gutar', 'convertable', 'representive', 'Tiping', 'Marihuana' kept as written.