Page 9
By Jack Joseph Smith
By Jack Joseph Smith
Original Scan
AI Interpretation
Even in fragmentary form, the page reads as a turn from witnessed brutality toward a vow against further killing.
The surviving lines move through pain, crowd response, foreignness, and a young student's appeal to 'make a pledge,' which gives the page an ethical pivot despite its damaged state. Because the transcription is partial, the safest reading is narrow: this is a page about violence being seen, named, and resisted in language that is still struggling to stabilize itself.
A damaged transitional page that loops the vote and the pledge together. The opening lines circle the officers' worry - 'confirming his / seagong fate,' the 'American' who 'might make' them 'wonder about the fisher / that vented his last lips on / the stake.' Then the verdict resurfaces: 'and what about man spoke out / the seamen all around,' 'here in pain,' and 'They voted to beat her to death.' The speaker, again 'a foreigner / now switched out of the power,' hands the page to 'a young student of adventure' who 'spoke up in measure,' making the pledge - 'on the murder of man, / we must make a pledge / to every no more for these / burns of men' - against falling into 'A coward's hell.' This reading stays provisional because the page is a mixed quality band, scan review is needs-followup, and heavily crossed-out handwriting remains uncertain.