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By Jack Joseph Smith

We cut to Ben and his paper truck behind the Pittsburgh Press building. He is with his father on the dock. They are obviously related. Both of stocky build, with ethnic Irish faces. The father also is a paper truck driver, but a laborer is loading his truck, while Ben loads his own. The time is the late summer of 1966, and the Allegany Valley smog and humnity if heavy. The dock is one long masive fill of gray concrete. The father is speaking. "Ya gonna stay down on dis cement slab for da rest of your life; and be an ass like me. All those rich boys from Mount Lebanon gonna call ya dumb Ben some day when they quit their part time and their old man's get um the big homes and put them behind the office glass in the factory so that they can give orders through the air conditioner. Ben, why in the hell don't you go up and run me tavern. Be full time at it. You can drop some of that beer belly, get some fancy duds and you'll be hav'in it. Maybe even a lady that don't chew gum. Ya know what I mean son. We know the boy in the rackets can marry the fashion designer if he takes to the urge. Not saying you have to get involved with dat kind of stuff. It's to much of an intellectual pain in the ass. But pushing good booze ain't bad, if ya got a good polished wooden joint. We got the antique mirrors, we know where to get the good cheese, and... Ben interrupts: This boy don't want nothing to do with running the bars.

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Ben's father urges him to leave paper-truck labor for tavern ownership, tying class advancement to local power, style, and masculine protection.

The dock setting, the late-summer smog, and the father's dialect make the argument feel rooted in Pittsburgh work life. His pitch is comic and blunt, but it also reveals a class fantasy: polished wood, antique mirrors, better clothes, and a woman outside the father's idea of working-class roughness. Ben's refusal frames him as resistant to the tavern world even before the violence question fully arrives.

Claude

Father and son load paper trucks on the 'long masive fill of gray concrete' dock in the late-summer 1966 smog, both 'stocky' with 'ethnic Irish faces.' The father's dialect monologue is the page's engine: he calls himself 'an ass,' predicts the 'rich boys from Mount Lebanon' will run the factory 'through the air conditioner,' and pitches the tavern as escape - 'fancy duds,' 'a lady that don't chew gum,' 'antique mirrors,' 'good cheese.' Ben cuts him off flatly in the third person: 'This boy don't want nothing to do with running the bars,' refusing the upgrade before the father can finish his sentence.