Page 7

By Jack Joseph Smith

cut to last scene - The end of a beautiful dinner has fallen place - Father - ya know Ben said today that he woulda work in a bar because it is dangerous. He said that my friends from the old school could bring the Jesus of death into somebody who tried to mess, but that his boys could never bring off that feeling of protection to a loved mothered gunslinger. I think it's to many people just looking at the clothing of things. But what really makes me sorry is that if Ben believes that sort of thing about my dad, doesn't he understand that he is my son.

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GPT

This handwritten fragment reads like a family argument about Ben, protection, danger, and what kind of masculinity can actually defend a woman.

Even in damaged form, the emotional structure is clear. The page opposes Ben's belief in toughness to a more intimate claim of kinship and disappointment. The closing insistence that `he / is my son` makes the page feel like a parent or elder trying to recover Ben from myth.

Claude

A handwritten dinner-table beat in which the father re-tells Ben's argument and feels it as a wound. His old-school friends, Ben said, 'could bring the Jesus of death into somebody who tried to mess,' while Ben's own boys 'could never bring off that feeling of protection to a loved mothered gunslinger' - too many people 'just looking at the clothing of things.' The father's hurt turns on kinship rather than toughness: 'what really makes me sorry is that if Ben believes that sort of thing about my dad, doesn't he understand that he is my son.' The page reframes the dock quarrel as a father quietly grieving his son's verdict on him.