Adem and Eve

By Jack Joseph Smith

When the Earth was so real That everything was unusual There was no choice but for me to love you For you were from me And I was from you

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AI Interpretation

GPT

A stripped-down creation poem in which intimacy is imagined as origin, kinship, and mutual making.

Its directness gives it the feel of a private creed or vow.


Claude

The misspelling of 'Adam' as 'Adem' is the poem's first act of revision — the creation story is retold with a new name, suggesting that origin must be reimagined before it can be inhabited. Love arrives not as choice but as the only response to a world so real that everything in it is unusual.

The poem's brevity gives it the quality of inscription — something carved rather than written, too essential for ornament. 'There was no choice but for me to love you' collapses theology into declaration.